As gallant winds of wild,
command among the sky.
Dancing through the blades,
two bluebirds soar to fly.
In sunlight, so does ruffle,
gentle wings of feather.
On wisp of floating cloud,
they flutter, happy together.
With music soft in whistle;
their chorus speaks rejoice.
Sounding true affection,
and love within their voice.
In seasons light and dark,
by side they both remain.
United, they have hope,
in face of taunting rain.
Cherish seals their bond,
for always they shall be.
Stronger with each other,
in flight, forever free.
Most innocent belief;
never should they part.
But fate came from hiding,
and struck upon the heart.
Soon dawn preceded dusk,
as rainbow one did cross.
Now other stays behind,
but sees this not as loss.
How airs still hear that song,
of love and joy entwined.
Two bluebirds flew together,
and each, again, theyβll find.
Β©Brett Kristian 2019
This is such a delightful piece. Love the meter and rhyme scheme too.
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This poem painted a beautiful image. Brings a sense of serenity and peace.
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Beautiful β€
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Delicate and beautiful. Love the image too.
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Reblogged this on AreMyFeetOffTheGround and commented:
I love this one, by Brett Kristian
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Oh Brett!! This is wonderful!
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Thank YOU. I very much enjoy your poetry.
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That means alot Tara thank you ππ
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Lovely.
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Wow, what an amazing poem… β€
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Beautiful!
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Great post
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Very beautiful your poem—and I also love the title of your blog, since I’m a leftie!!
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Such a lovely poemππ
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Reblogged this on From 1 Blogger 2 Another.
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I can’t think of many poets who write in a romantic, lyrical style β¦ really lovely work. – tsk
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Your very welcome ππ
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Lovely poetry, and your blog as well!
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Most welcome!
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Beautifully penned, Brett. Love the flow of this poem and its gorgeous imagery with the birds. The metrical structure of 6 syllable verses and the rhymes on the second and fourth verses of each stanza add great lyricism and musicality to your piece. I also like the message of hope in the following lines:
“Now other stays behind,
but sees this not as loss.”
It is so difficult for us to face loss and to learn to let go in life. When it comes to personal accomplishments we often feel devoid, deluded. I strongly recommend you and the rest of your followers here to read my friend Mario Savioniβs novel (very short chapters) βPickles and Tartsβ. A lot of what your lovely poem expresses is there as well: what one dares to dream but cannot always accomplish: βFrank thought about this. Was he looking for a partner or someone to have sex with? He did not think beyond that simple, single transaction β the satisfaction of his baser needs, not realizing that his needs might go on given the possibility of this opportunity and mutual attraction.β Excerpt from here: https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/02/27/pickles-and-tarts-chapter-8/
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The part where you refer to them being together and united somehow reminds me of the passage in Eccl. 4:9-12. π
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This is beautiful art.
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So beautiful! β€
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This is lovely, Brett. It reminded me if my sister who passed a few years ago. Always to remain never lost.
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I love birds and I loved this poem…
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I love this beautiful intertwining of wing and feather. I am rather fond of bluebirds. I have a poem entitled Bluebirds in Late Winter that you may enjoy : https://fiddleheadsnfloss.com/2019/02/13/bluebirds-in-late-winter/
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This is so beautiful. I read a couple of your poems and you are amazing! β€οΈ
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Outstanding
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Welcome sir
You’re an outstanding writer
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