Golden stone born to sand,
immersing toes in tread.
Ocean kiss, breathing mist,
as gulls soar skies ahead.
Stunning scene, beach of vast;
no other mars this peace.
Walking both side by side,
as time does stop to cease.
Footed bare, laughter rings;
old stories flow in tale.
Recollect, memories dear,
along this seashore’s trail.
Blush of sun shines upon,
as cherished bond does thrive.
Lonely hours since depart,
now fade where we arrive.
Rugged shells of the swim,
in rest of splendid strand.
On approach to waves edge,
we pause to take our stand.
Skies of blue dazzle light,
where pieces mend in heal.
Sorrows heart once in split,
now beats again to feel.
Treasured dream, please remain;
let truth not flow to mind.
Should this vision draw to end,
one set of prints you’ll find.
Praise this beach with belief;
one day I’ll grasp your hand.
That together, we’ll both be,
upon the Lord’s blessed sand.
©Brett Kristian 2019
Nice flow.
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Ah ! Just too good
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Nice piece – with economy of means
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I want to learn poetry? Can you teach me? Please?
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Best advice I can give is just write in a style that is comfortable for you. There is no wrong or right way of writing poetry so experiment and most of all just enjoy it 😊 hope this helps 😊
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I’m about to go to the beach with my family, and this has got me pumped even more than I already am!
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Thank you 😊 enjoy the beach 😊
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Stunningly beautiful poem 💖💕🌷🌳🍃
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Very kind thank you 😊😊
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A pleasure 💖💕🌷🌳🍃
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Lovely poem. 🙂
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Great post my friend
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Hmm ,wondering where u have been all this while,, think am getting inspirations from your poem
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The imagery used is very enthralling. Anand Bose from Kerala.
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Nice!
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Wonderfully written! I enjoyed the journey as it turned up my imagination to finally reach the blessed sand.
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Very kind words thank you 😊😊
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A beautiful piece 💜
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Beautiful writing. I love this poem
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