“Shoo! Shoo! Go away!”
“Where did it go?”
“Is it gone yet? No! It’s there, SHOO!”
“Shoo I say”!
Now just hold on a second!
I’m only a buzzing bee.
I’ve came into your garden,
with a mission to complete.
Frenzied screams, really?
Oh look he’s running away.
And why is she still crying?
I didn’t come to play.
The summer sun in season,
with ripened flowers to pick.
I think you’re overreacting,
now put down that big stick!
“I hate them, OH I HATE THEM!”
Seriously? I could not guess.
But pollen is my market,
in fact, I’m one of the best.
I came here for the daisies,
ok and bluebells too.
And since I made this flight,
I see your rosemary grew.
The Queen at home is waiting;
our banquet is tonight.
And I’ll regale my story,
of all your silly fright.
“It stung me, oh it stung me!”
Beg pardon? I have not!
Had you done your research,
my ending, you’d have brought.
Now settle down those screams,
I’m finished and I’ll leave.
“I hate those pesky wasps!”
Now just one moment please.
I see you have two eyes,
and working they must be.
Perhaps explain your insult;
and my name is the bee.
I’ll stand those wailing arms,
heck, even that big stick.
But calling me a wasp,
now that’s a big mistake.
“The wasp is going, it’s going!”
And yes I won’t be back.
But just remember I’m the bee,
who told the wasps ATTACK!
©Brett Kristian 2019
This is like, symbolism, for the garden.
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I love bees… though I don’t care for wasps or hornets (the jerkfaces). Very entertaining to watch, for sure. So, I loved your poem!
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Thank you Tara 😊 I had lots of fun writing this one 🐝
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It was fun to read!
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Delightful read. 🐝
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Thank you 😊
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Read a few of your works and I must say that they are all pretty intriguing. And so is this one. Your poems remind me of metaphysical poetry in terms of the subjects you have chosen. Hoping to read more of your creations. Keep writing !
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Thank you for the very kind feedback on my work. You have wonderful content and I will be sure to visit your blog site 😊😊
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Lovely poem
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Thank you 😊
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haha I loved this poem 👍😊
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Thank you 😊😊
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Cute poem. Now I know why the wasps show up.
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Revenge of the bees 🐝🐝 thank you for the feedback 😊😊
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Coming to your theaters soon!
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Haha really nice, I like it! 😊🐝
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That’s exactly how a bee would talk and think ❤this
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Very kind thank you 😊😊
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You’re welcome
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Thank you for the follow also
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Real fun to read this poem. Great writing.🙂👍
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Excellent writing
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Thank you 😊😊
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You are amazing! Great job. This poem was funny. 😂
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Your very kind 😊 thank you for the lovely feedback 😊😊
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M the girl who cried in your poem 🙈😂
Thanks for mentioning me , lol… 😂😂
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🤣🤣🤣 your very welcome lol
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This poem would make a great children’s book. What a empathetic lesson to tell a tale from the insects perspective – and question why humans are so quick to hate because of fear…
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Aww thank you so very much. Lovely feedback 😊😊
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Thanks for liking my recent post. Just for kicks, you should scan through my archives and find my post called The Left Hand of God…
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Your very welcome and I will do 😀😀
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Beautiful and eloquent —the prose is so engaging Anand Bose from Kerala.
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Reblogged this on Meditations of a Millennial Writer.
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This poem does make me nostalgic for summer….
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Ha! Love it. I wrote one about a buggy headed towards the light, but not as fun or delicious as this one!
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Your very kind, thank you ☺☺
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Brilliant write, delightful read!
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