Alas the rainbow burned;
behold its ash did fall.
Showered in clouds of faint,
despair did etch its scrawl.
Descending path held soot;
the road of shadows raged.
Downward tumbled spiral,
upon emotions caged.
Barbaric doors bolt shut;
windows hid their view.
Alone found desolation,
bore its solitary screw.
Consigned was fate to dark,
with plead of mercies end.
As halted cries went silent,
no cure could hope to mend.
Defeatist heart resigned,
until that threshold spoke.
Commit this fragile soul;
be safe from gravely smoke.
This sanctuary breathes in peace;
long sought on troubled walk.
Recuperating hidden scars,
as buried dreams now talk.
Forgive those wings of stall;
do pardon acts of flaw.
Secure within this haven,
finds shelter from cruel claw.
Where time is not a master;
this sanctuary ticks in heal.
In promise that direction,
shall steer with tranquil feel.
Β©Brett Kristian 2019
beautiful
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So beautiful π
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I love the intentional four line breaks– it reads like a sonnet or a song.
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Glad to have found your blog. Like what I have read so far.
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Thank you, very kind π
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Exceptional!
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Beautiful flow as in lyrics of a song. Bravo! Thank you for following BrewNSpew!
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Thank you for the lovely feedback and your very welcome ππ
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“Buried dreams now talk”–I hear that!!
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Had to go back for a 2nd read, so much here to absorb. I really LOVE these lines:
Forgive those wings of stall;
do pardon acts of flaw.
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My pleasure.
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Beautiful πΌ
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I like the flow and feel of this.
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Beautiful!
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Very kind, thank you π
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Exceptionally beautiful. I have been reading your musings and they are very unique. Powerful and Extremely thought provoking. Glad to have come across you. Peace and greetings π
Shanyu.
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Thank you for the lovely comment. Peace and greetings too ππ
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You are always welcome. Keep writing. Nice to talk to a fellow left handed!
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