Emotions tears so flew,
streamed by salted sway.
Heartfelt echoes sounded,
in cast of lights warm ray.
Born heavy clouds of seek,
find promised hands in bind.
Dragged from lying shadows,
to face despairs cold grind.
Evolving mind failed start,
for reckless had so stepped.
But came embarking mercies,
revived where sorrow wept.
Past wick refused relight;
of candle, gained was new.
Bathed in milks of modest,
forged from tortures blue.
In stride fell scriptures truth;
goodwill breathes soul alive.
With beating pump in revel,
compassions heart did thrive.
In measure, faltered balance,
unjust through scales of war.
But love and pain wove to knit,
this character who had tore.
Β©Brett Kristian 2019
This is so well written! π
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oh! Love this!!
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Thanks Tara ππ
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I don’t generally enjoy poems about emotions, but I enjoyed the meter and rhyme of this piece. Thank you for the work.
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I love this! So well written!
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Very kind thank you ππ
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Extraordinary writing…wow.
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Most welcome.
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Love and pain go hand in hand π
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nicely penned- liked it a lot-Rupa
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Love and pain making a life lived…
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So very true. Thank you π
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Your writing is your gift to others. Hope you post new work soon. A talent like yours should be shared. Xx
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Beautifully penned
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“Dragged from lying shadows” I loved this!π
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Absolutely beautiful writing β€οΈ
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Exquisite poetry! Your wording is beautiful! And you are missed…
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Thank you for the lovely message. I hope to get back very soon to writing and sharing π
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Fellow poet, I certainly recognize the gift of writing that you have! And I appreciate it very much! I hope you are well, and I am looking forward to you writing again! Take care…
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Wonderfully penned!
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