Tender delicate ribbon,
I see you twirling by.
Swooning in the rhythm,
of winters dusk like sky.
Exquisite to behold;
gentle in your grace.
Splendid is the vision,
smiling upon my face.
Swirling past the clouds,
elegant with such poise.
Dancing in the breeze,
bringing heartfelt joys.
Lands you whirl across,
guiding those below.
Sent with his blessing;
the Lord does bestow.
Symbolic delicate ribbon,
heart, you tug the strings.
Praise to your presence,
for peace within, it brings.
My heart brims with love,
for I know who you are.
Woven in silks beauty,
like that of Heavens star.
Blissful, you are happy;
no tears will fall tonight.
With our loving saviour,
rejoicing in his light.
Dearest delicate ribbon,
be free, now you fly.
But as I look up at you,
I know itโs not goodbye.
ยฉBrett Kristian 2018
Wonderful Sunday morning read. Thank you.
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Thank you Mary ๐
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Oh I loved the magic of this!
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Thanks Tara ๐
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This is such a beautiful poemโฆ
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Beautiful
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You’re welcome.
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exquisite
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Aw, gorgeous and heartfelt. Brimming with romance
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absolutely beautiful!
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This is a great poem..I wish I had skills like you..๐
Also..thanks for liking my post. Love from Nepal.
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Your very kind thank you and your work is brilliant really enjoyed reading it ๐
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Welcome๐
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very good poetry rhying beautifully in the traditional way my type of poetry enjoyed this very much well done to you from kevin may I just say also this could have been two separate poems aswell good luck keep up the great work.
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Thank you Kevin ๐ very kind feedback
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Your very welcome your a great inspiration and very gifted poet well done.
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It’s beautiful
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This is such a lovely poemโฆ
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Lefties unite!
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Thanks for sharing, this was a beautiful piece ๐๐๐ฝ
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Beautifully written, Brett. Love the magic musicality and imagery of this poem. Also, its freshness and the sense of freedom the swirling and twirling ribbon evokes. You set the delicate ribbon free and it flies but also “it’s not goodbye”. As a person coming from Catalonia I cannot avoid my mind associating your lovely ribbon poem (which has obviously nothing to do with what I will say next), with our yellow ribbon, the symbol that has become our non-violent fight for freedom and democracy. And thank you so much for liking my last poem in collaboration with poet Donald Standeford.
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Thank you for your very kind feedback. Am so glad you picked up on the theme of freedom without goodbyes. Your very welcome your poem was a wonderful read ๐
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Thank you so much, Brett. I am glad you enjoyed it!
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