Raining purple skies,
drop stars, red in bolt.
Above rebellious rivers;
where backwards fish revolt.
Valleys boast in tongue,
as forests dress with pride.
Soldiered is the march,
of robins swooning by.
Spinning leafs do swirl,
kissing violent gales.
Riding on blue clouds;
chasing wagging tails.
Nature sings as ruler;
worms wear their crown.
Laughing twigs command;
mushrooms be the clown.
Pathways made of icing,
lining chocolate streets.
Gazing out the windows,
are owls eating sweets.
Upward stands the hare,
beaming with a smile.
Greeting to close friend,
“Hello, it’s been awhile.”
Now question, there is one,
what ramblings do I speak?
Deluded or mislead,
for obscure, this does read.
But answer is too simple
and reason is the key.
Boundary there is none;
this tool is always free.
Bestowed is such a gift,
upon each and all.
So use your imagination,
and let your mind now draw.
©Brett Kristian 2018
Great poem, Brett. I especially like the rhythm made in this one!
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Thank you Joseph 😊
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I LOVE this Brett!
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Thank you Tara 😊😊😊
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Genius!!!! Love love love this poem. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Thank you 😊
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Great words!
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Thank you 😊
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You’re very welcome. Keep up the good work.
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Love the light in this poem. Also blending nature’s consciousness with human proclivities. Lovely, Brett!
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Thank you for the lovely feedback 😊
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Now, that’s what I call imagination! This piece is fly as hell and I dig it!
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Thank you 😊
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Hahahahaha Owls. Hoody hoot.
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😊
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🦉
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Jst wow
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Thank you 😊
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This is rich in imagery, personification, alliteration, rhythm, rhyme…. My favorite alliteration is “rebellious rivers,” and my favorite personification is “forests dress with pride.” I also like the challenge at the end for each of us to let our own imaginations run wild.
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Lovely feedback thank you very much 😊
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So full of pictures, ideas and the powerful call of nature’s cycles outside and within ourselves. Thank-you.
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Thank you 😊😊
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A very musical piece, with wonderful imagery. I did so enjoy reading this. ^-^
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Your very kind thank you 😊😊
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